The White City by Alec Michod: A Book Review

February 23, 2009


I read a great many books. As you might expect, I primarily read nonfiction pertaining to Chicago. Occasionally, however, I'll look for some lighter reading just to pass the time when concentration is not possible. For some reason, even the fiction I choose has something to do with Chicago. Ya, what a shocker.

While trotting to my gate at O'Hare Airport last week it occurred to me that I had somehow forgotten to bring some reading material for the flight. (This doesn't happen often. I always have a book with me, even in the car.) I stopped at the Field Museum store and noticed a book on the shelf that I thought would be perfect: The White City by Alec Michod. Historical fiction can be fun and when the setting is the Chicago Columbian Exposition, well, I'm a happy camper. After reading the book, however, I'm not so happy.

The plot of The White City is strangely familiar. A serial killer is preying on young boys at the Columbian Exposition and their mutilated bodies are turning up all over the fair grounds. When the son of a noted Chicago architect, who happens to be working with Potter Palmer, is pinched a noted forensic psychologist and sleuth, Dr. Elizabeth Handley, is called in to help catch the evil doer. I'm not going to go into more detail about the plot because you just might want to read the book.

But, here is my main problem. I judge fictional works by some simple criteria - Do I care about the main characters? Is the writing clear? While the plot may not be entirely believable, can I follow it? Unfortunately, this is a case where I have to say, no to all three. Concerning the characters, it's more a case of not knowing them. Michod just doesn't quite sketch them clearly enough. His writing style is a chaotic and awkward to read and I honestly couldn't get a handle on the plot or even care. Not good signs

In all fairness, this was Michod's debut novel published in 2004, and the poor guy must have been devastated to find that Eric Larson's The Devil in the White City was on the shelves and a phenomenal best-seller. Timing is everything - or a big part - of publishing, but I'm afraid it was a bit off the mark this time.

For me, The White City was a dull grey. But, like all works of art, the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, or in this case, reader. Never take a reviewer's word as gospel. So, go. Judge for yourself. Let me know what you think. Who knows; maybe I was just in a bad mood and didn't get it.

9 comments:

RetroKimmer February 23, 2009 7:21 PM  

I love this blog it is designed so perfectly and so readable. Sharon how are you? Hope you are doing ok. You keep popping up in my alerts for all my many blogs...Farner9 and Dennis Machinegun Thompson. LOL Thanks for all your help! I am going to make you a badge and email you the text area code. I will put it on all of my 11 blogs now! YIKES :)

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Emily Retherford February 23, 2009 8:40 PM  

Awww I'm upset you didn't like you didn't like it I thought I was going to have a good Chicago based book to check out!

Emily
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Sharon February 24, 2009 5:59 AM  

Kimmer,I just saw the badge.OMG! It looks great! I can't believe you did that. Please send the code to me. I'm a technological idiot. Wait, you write 11 blogs? I have a headache. On a personal note, the past few weeks have been very difficult, but things are beginning to stabilize. It will take some time to catch up, but I'm working on it. Many thanks for asking.

Sharon February 24, 2009 6:02 AM  

Emily, don't take my word for it. Read the book yourself. You might love it. On a technical not - people will find your blog through your profile. It is not necessary to list it. I almost deleted your comment as spam!

designslinger.com February 24, 2009 12:52 PM  

Thanks for the review. May check out The White City, but the plot line does sound very familiar! So, you'd better have a pretty good story to tell and tell it well.

Glad to read that things are stabilizing.

Jim

Sharon February 25, 2009 3:55 PM  

Designslinger,

Seriously, I feel sorry for the guy! I read that he is working on a new book. Perhaps it will be a little clearer writing style.

Yes, things are stabilizing. It is amazing how quickly one can get behind, though. Thank you, as always, for your support.

Anonymous,  April 21, 2010 7:47 AM  

Egads! I am struggling through this book right now. Bought it because of the topic, which was so wonderfully plumbed in "Devil in the White City." You're right on the money with your review. I think Mr. Michod will be fine as a writer once he hooks up with a good editor who can help him reorder his thoughts, develop characters, find a proper tense and -- most important -- stop writing the phrase "on account of" which appears throughout the book with alarming frequency. I am determined to make it to the end of this book, but it's a clunky endeavor. Thanks for the great blog, by the way.
--Nancy

Sharon April 21, 2010 8:12 AM  

Thanks for stopping, Nancy. Ya, the book is a clunker. Sometimes historical fiction can be very good and I've run across several more set in old Chicago. Perhaps they might be appropriate for beach reading. I'll have to check them out.

Anonymous,  April 21, 2010 3:59 PM  

Sharon, I just recommended to someone a "double feature" of "Sin in the Second City" and "Devil in the White City." Great bookend books that I couldn't put down. If you have other old Chicago reads, let us all know, and thanks again for the nice site. We're in St. Louis but make it to Chicago several times a year to explore new places.

--Nancy

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